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Friday 23 May 2014
My Special Place Writing
My reflection
I was learning how to add detail using my five senses.
One thing that worked well for me was
Being in my special place to get ideas
One thing I could do better next time
is find more words for the smells.
Nathan this is really well done. I know that you enjoy the school field. Remember when we drove past the field when it was really dark? We had just picked Jayden up from rugby training and you said that the field looked very creepy as it was dark and empty.
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Nathan this is really well done. I know that you enjoy the school field. Remember when we drove past the field when it was really dark? We had just picked Jayden up from rugby training and you said that the field looked very creepy as it was dark and empty.
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